Monday, 4 June 2012
Boys school football squad
As Mr Rickard walked into pouakai territory, all contestants that trialed for the Tawa intermediate football team, were nervously waiting for the results. I stood on the bench outside Room 14, my legs slightly shaking. The results would be published on the window, by Mr Rickard, he strode over to the dirty window he slowly and dramatically squashed the blue tack against the window, every single person was pushing and shoving to find out the results. My eyes scanned down the list like laser and there it was, my name Lachie Hill. I let out a huge sigh and placed a smile on my face. I had made into the squad.
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Hey Lach-star!
ReplyDeleteWell done on getting into the squad!
I enjoyed reading this little snippet of writing. I could imagine you nervously standing on the chair and I like the way you created suspense by mentioning the little things like Mr Rickard striding and dramatic squashing of the blu tack.
Hope you guys are a great team.
Ms T